She moves through life
like fish swimming in the water.
Not the tiny ones snapping to and fro.
Her movements are reminiscent of the Universe.
Its the great white
gliding
majestically.
Unmindful of the pettier ones;
the currrent of her passing
bullying them a bit.
Shepherding, scolding
Soothing, stimulating
A go between, a procurer.
And when the kids have grown and gone
she will glide slower and slower,
her great big heart
flooding the shores
with salty tears.
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something written a long long time ago. I don't remember anymore what or who insipired this.
its beautiful and majestic
somebody had to speak for her and its you
And you did it with style and elegance.
i am glad you have understood life so well.
There is no good or bad when it comes to life.
a virus, a snake, or a harmless deer.
All forms of life have only two activities. survival and procreation.
All of them except us humans spend their entire life span only in those two activities. They all are within their rights to do anything to survive.
this is simply amazing.... somthing as simple as fish is elevated to an elegant creature thro your words....
The imagery is vivid and simple, showing in a few lines an immense picture of life, as rauf said. Lovely job, yes elegant, the best word I can think of too. So glad you're writing.
:) does life always end in separation and sadness?
doesnt life always end in separation and sadness.
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applaud
:)
Mystic,
The last stanza unfolds the universal love, the love of mother nature herself. Who else can flood the shore with the tears?
Beautiful..
How exquisitely you depict the natural cycles of both nature and humans. Beautiful!
empty nest...am feeling it now.sad!
My I have missed your insight. This is a very moving piece that I can relate to. Sorry to neglect our friendship I have been running away from home each day to walk within the breeze to capture wispers spoken to me.
So beautiful, so lyrical and such wonderful imagery.
sorry for the rather late responses.
rauf,
Thank you!! Im glad I finally was able to write something you like.
yes there is no good or bad , except what expereince teaches us. there is only beneficial and harmful, i think :).
parv,
thanks. all creatures are naturally elegant :).
ruth,
i rewrote this keeping in mind some of your advice and suggestions from earlier . :) Thank you.
ghost,
does it? doesnt it? :)
and yet if one is only part of the whole, there is neither seperation nor joining.
like the drops that rise up high out of the ocean and fall back.
naj
sorry for the dealyed reply, thank you for visiting my blog, its been a long time! I was so happy to visit yours and catch up.
Also thanks for the award. I will do my best for the honor. :)
joy,
bow.
shiva,
as always its a pleasure to see youve read and read your comments.
thank you.
janice,
yeah, theres much beautyf inthis rhythm, these cycles. as also sorrow. thank you, my gentle friend.
starry,
yes? there is so much you do, but still you feel the emptiness without your children, no?
Life without being able to give that nourishing love seems so empty.
pauline,
Though of course you were missed, I am glad for you that you took your time. I hope these whipsers bring you deep peace. Love.
absolute sweetness and absolute atyllah(grumpiness?),
thank you! I am glad to see you here again. Will be over shortly.
unique and beautiful imagery!
A beautiful metaphor !
Good to be back. :-)
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